well, this is the part where rick wrote it... i placed the text on the right this time as i wanted it to be seen first, like on the previous page where i wanted the picture of rick to be the first thing to grace the eye of the reader. i wanted to keep this entire piece nice and simple... any views on my work are more than welcome. oh and why the feathers? jazz is a very colourful music and i wanted something i could draw and get away with making very bright so i though feathers would be a nice touch...
Again, looks good Mark, nice and simple. A couple of points on the text though. Turn off the hyphenation. It will stop the words breaking at the end of the line. Also add "quotation marks" as the complete section is a quote. Can you ask someone to proof read it please, quite a few grammar errors. I can run through it if you want to bring me in a B&W copy.
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